I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
Hi Ashlyn, I mostly enjoyed hearing your recount about your sleep over. It sounds awesome! I have also been to a sleep over too. It was with my cousins, like about 4 - 5 years ago. I enjoyed sleep overs too because we played video games and had fun with our cousins. There is one mistake in your recount, when it says " most of the time we we're painting ..." It's suppose to be "most of the time we were painting...". Anyway keep up the great work.
Hi Ashlyn,
ReplyDeleteI mostly enjoyed hearing your recount about your sleep over. It sounds awesome! I have also been to a sleep over too. It was with my cousins, like about 4 - 5 years ago. I enjoyed sleep overs too because we played video games and had fun with our cousins. There is one mistake in your recount, when it says " most of the time we we're painting ..." It's suppose to be "most of the time we were painting...". Anyway keep up the great work.
Have a good week,
From Lyle