I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
Thursday, 13 August 2015
Blog Comment on Denzal's Remember Poem
This week we have been doing remember poem's based on camp for writing. Today I commented on Denzal's blog about his camp! Here is the link: http://hpsdenzalhp.blogspot.co.nz/2015/08/my-remember-when-poem.html#comment-form
Here is the screenshot:
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Kia ora Ashlyn,
ReplyDeleteI can see you have asked Denzal a question so that you can get a conversation going. It would be great to see you try to make a greater connection with Denzal - what is one way people can do that when blog commenting?
Talofa lava Mrs Kingston,
ReplyDeleteI do agree with you that I could have made a better connection with Denzal! I think I will make a better connection with the next person I comment on! Thanks for the help Mrs Kingston!
Thanks, Ashlyn